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Recovering Life

01 May

thu-thump, thu-thump, thu-thump

deathly silence, heart beat stops

was it enough, was there the love

approval maybe, but that one time

why did that happen, answer

purposefully made pain happened

recovered, sure, but does it repair

attempt at the best, is it enough

ran again, did wrong, turned away

but came back, tried hard to redeem

too far away gone, never enough

what to do, where to go, give up

no, can’t be, help is coming, wait

heart beat stops, deathly silence

thu-thump, thu-thump, thu-thump

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3 Comments

Posted by on May 1, 2010 in Creative Corner

 

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3 responses to “Recovering Life

  1. kkollwitz

    May 3, 2010 at 10:13 pm

    Wow…this isn’t the usual.

     
  2. Ash

    May 3, 2010 at 10:16 pm

    It is not my usual, but it was inspired deep within to be written down, so I did. Take out the whole middle, leaving the first two lines and the last two lines. Some about that, as I realized right now, is oddly powerful in itself.

     
  3. Dominique

    May 11, 2010 at 7:41 pm

    God’s forgiveness? Us as sinner’s? I really like it.

     

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